DSMagnum's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Khuskan - A song for Denvish]

WOW

That was very interesting. Some of the things you say are kind of hard to understand, but it was okay. This gave me good laugh. :D

5/5

~ DSM

[-_-_-*trance dance*-_-_-]

Title of Review

Well, I must say, this piece is not your typical Trance song. Sadly, I must also say that I didn't like it. Though you had all the elements needed, you had some others that didn't fit. One of the synths you used really broke the piece. It turned it from a normal trance song to some Halloween techno piece. The drum kit you used to make the beats was kinda weak. You could've changed the bass to something that was a little harder thumping. The snare hits were also kinda wussy. You could've increased the velocity on them to make them come out more.

I was not too impressed with this piece, though it was your first attempt, so I'm giving you a 3/5.

~ DSM

aspachi responds:

oh shit late reply! december 10th, 2006. well it was my first attempt at trance and i've actually gotten better. i can't say much atm i got a lot of rpg working to do.

[Bass Master]

I'm loving that deep bass

This song didn't really show me anything too special, but I loved that deep bass. I could feel it more than I heard it, and it was cool.

Nothing else to say. 5/5

~ DSM

[Heureux]

Weak

I'm gonna have to be honest to you about this song. I found it quite weak. The song showed so much potential, but it was lacking. You could've affored to turn the volume up a little more, or maybe doubled up on some instruments.

This piece was also quite cheesy. Nothing against that, but it made me laugh. :P

Truthfully, I didn't like the piece very much, but I'm kinda cheery right now, so I'm gonna be nice and give you a 4/5. I'd appreciate it if you were to review my Trance-ish piece.

Link: http://newgrounds.com/audio/view.php?id=1682211&sub=66130

~ DSM

DaGrahamCraka responds:

mmmm, well i kidna wanted it to be cheesy, like, little, cutie chaser kinda thing. but whatever.

[~)aspachi's emotion(~]

Amazing

Something about your music tells me that you were born to do this. You're a very talented artist, and yet so young? This and all of your other pieces are amazing. You could go somewhere with this.

I do have one thing to say about this though. The bass you are using is kinda mushy and sounds a little harsh. Try changing the velocity of the drum or the effects on it to give is a clearer, more sustained sound.

Everything else was just amazing though. I would appreciate it if you were to check out my music sometime.

~ DSM

aspachi responds:

i have has this telent since i started making music at age 8. i am very talented with fantasy music, (which is my specailty) sure of course i will check out your audio when i got the time (which i have 24 hours :p) anyways thanks for your review and don't forget to rate the 5/5 or 0/0 to songs you didn't like or did like so i can get a little extra boost :). i use master generator 2004 which can be updated each month for better instruments, and better quality options. thanks for the review.

[{ANT} - Crazy Bus Driver]

Fairly Interesting

A very odd piece you have here. Nothing to get excited about, but it's hard to say what you should improve on. Maybe add some more interesting melodies. That should do it.

~ DSM

Anth0n responds:

Yeah, it probably should do it.

[The God of Noise]

Definetely would fit in GOW

This was pretty good. DNB just isn't really your style. A lot of aspects are missing or were just done poorly.

4/5 for it sounding somewhat cool.

~ DSM

Dimrain47 responds:

I would have concluded more "aspects" if this were not for a contest with specific requirements.

[*Eternal Flames* / ZeRo BaSs]

Great

Yesterday I was browsing around looking for Dance music to put on a CD and I found this, but I hadn't realized this was the #1 song of the week. Congrats on that!

It was all really good, except I didn't really like the lyrics part. It sounded pretty dark and didn't fit into the song too well. Everything else was fantastic though.

~ DSM

ZeRo-BaSs responds:

DSM..<3 =D