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I liked the Clavi a lot. The Sax wasn't too great though. It sounded rough. Some of the parts sounded off beat. It's very good work indeed, but could use some work.
~ DSM
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5d.
Author's Response:
ur a meenie
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I don't really care if one of your songs pop up in the top 5 every now and then, but it's been occuring more and more, and this week you have all the spots. This leads to me to believe one thing: you downvote other songs so you can win. If not, sorry about the accusation, but it really pisses me off. You have very little musical talent. Your genres are all off. Everything is shitty. If you want, I'll teach you some things that I know. If you don't feel like getting better, stop making music. You're really bad at it.
~ DSM
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You changed it from that preview you sent me the other night! I liked the new lead! It sounded so much cooler than this version. Though the bass is thicker, the other version has a cooler line for it. :(
5/5
~ DSM
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I love how thick the bass is and the drum samples you used, but it lacked greatly in the upper range. It needs more. Maybe a pad or two, some arps, or maybe a lead line.
4/5
~ DSM
Author's Response:
Thanx for the tips ill see what i can do.
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I loved everything but the drums. It sounds like you just panned the whole kit to the right. If you're going to add panning to a kit, try to make it more surrounding than what you did.
5/5
~ DSM
Author's Response:
thanks for the review but as far as the druns I wanted to keep it simple. peace
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You really need to figure out what you can do to change up pieces more. Add more instruments, change up the melodies, etc.
Another discrepency is that it's very basic. You could use much more layering. Make the piece thicker.
This piece I didn't really like. It wasn't pleasing. You're much better at other styles.
~ DSM
Author's Response:
Yeah, it is fairly basic... I thought simplicity, for this song, was pretty good. I guess I was wrong. :( Aah well. I'll be sure to be extra careful in this area from now on... thanks for the review, DSMagnum. :)
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There isn't much diversity. It's pretty much the exact same pad throughout the entire song. Not much change. As you progress, it does sound better with the bells. More atmospheric as you want. However, shortly after you bring another instrument in that causes some peaking. Some mastering couldn't have hurt. Very cool idea, but could use lots of work.
~ DSM
Author's Response:
Again, people are throwing diversity at me time and time again today. So, naturally, I don't have much to add in this response. Yeah, I know about the peaking... I'm working on that, it's annoying. >_<
Thanks again for reviewing my songs, DSMagnum, I'll be sure to keep your advice in mind. :)
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I guess it sounds cool, but the kicks and snares are too punchy for this kind of song. Also, I didn't like the glitchy part. It didn't fit.
WTFLOL 5
~ DSM
P.S. - This review sux.
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POOPIES
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I love it. It has a nice Matrix type feel to it. It felt a little empty though. Maybe a little more bass or effects? That would've perfected the song.
5/5
~ DSM
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